Thursday, January 20, 2011

It's a Cliffhanger.


An original short story, authored by Buttercup.  Written via dictation, with minor grammatical edits by Mommy.  Reviews welcome.  


The Leader That Shows the Policemen How to be a Policeman, by Buttercup

Once upon a time there were a lot of policemen.  One day they went to their car. 

“Come on,” said the leader.  “Come on in the car.  Let’s go.  Buckle up!”

They did the things that the leader said.  They picked a key.  They got in the car before they buckled.  Then they did go all the way to kill a bad guy.  They drove and drove. 

“It did take a long time,” said one of the policemen. 

Then they stopped at a house and they helped somebody.  They just used their instructions without paper.  They told them what to do.

Then they took a break until they were ready to kill a bad guy.  They killed ten bad guys.  Then a bad guy ran away and the policemen got them – the other ones who were helping.  Then they got in their car and went to work in their garden. 

CRASH!

“Here comes a big something but we don’t know what it is!”

The End

2 comments:

  1. From what you post here and on FB, Buttercup sounds like a very delightful, entertaining kid. You must have holes in your lips from trying not to just laugh out loud.

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  2. So true! I'm not sure what we used to do for entertainment before we had her around!

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